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I'm still alive.
I see and hear.
I feel my heartbeat but

                                                      I
                                                   don't
                                                    feel
pain, anger, sadness.

                                                      I
                                                   don't
                                                    feel
pleasure, relief, happiness.

                                                    I'm
                                                  numb.
I'm a balloon.
A shell full of nothing
but air.
Hmm, I was feeling numb in case you didn't catch that. Haha.
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Vampire-Queen-18 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
imwit u guys, needs to have better- well better evertything, but atleast we can put ourn rittin here :)
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CupcakeSlaughter Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
Yeah. I do really appreciate that dA accepts literature. Haha.
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Vampire-Queen-18 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
kewlllll, i feel like that..... well alot, anywho i added more about teh night world in my artist comments 4 u, if u wanna chek it out.
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flamehead23a Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
wow. this must have been a terror to format on DA. Kudos to you.
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CupcakeSlaughter Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
It was. :P And I kept having to go back and correct it. But thank you for noticing. xD
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flamehead23a Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
no problem. I've toyed with concrete poetry on DA before, but never to the desired end. Le sigh, this site just isn't really made for us writers.
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CupcakeSlaughter Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2010
No, it really isn't. :P I couldn't figure out why they didn't have <center> while I was submitting it. That's one of the most basic codes. >_<
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flamehead23a Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
I know what you mean. damn shame, that.
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CupcakeSlaughter Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010
It is quite the shame.
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