I'm still alive.
I see and hear.
I feel my heartbeat but
pain, anger, sadness.
pleasure, relief, happiness.
I'm a balloon.
A shell full of nothing
Hmm, I was feeling numb in case you didn't catch that. Haha.
imwit u guys, needs to have better- well better evertything, but atleast we can put ourn rittin here
kewlllll, i feel like that..... well alot, anywho i added more about teh night world in my artist comments 4 u, if u wanna chek it out.
wow. this must have been a terror to format on DA. Kudos to you.
It was. And I kept having to go back and correct it. But thank you for noticing. xD
no problem. I've toyed with concrete poetry on DA before, but never to the desired end. Le sigh, this site just isn't really made for us writers.